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Destiny'sChild
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-03-30 05:16 PM


for years and lifetimes
i have dreamd of the
how close i wanted to be
to feel your heart beating fast
to see you look into my eyes
and see right through my soul
the way you hold my
the way you kiss me
when i'm with you
i feel i can do no wrong
is this what true love should be?
i've never felt love so strong
your eyes the color
of the clearest of blue skys
how can i let you know
my love for you is true
oh god please help me
i'm caut betwein a
life i used to know
and the one that's just begun
shall i take the un named road
i want to take the un walked path
but only if you are thair
to hold my hand
i just wanted to say that
baby i love you!!!!!

                            destiny

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John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-03-30 05:21 PM


I feel you are about to embark upon an incredible journey. A lovely poem.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-30 06:32 PM


This is really sweet.  Love causes some amazing changes in ones life!!

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-03-30 06:46 PM


Destiny,

This poem shows a lot of love. You've got to take that road.

~Gene

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-03-30 08:07 PM


Destiny,

The road of a love is one you must take. It is clear by this lovely poem, that u are clearly in love. I wish you nothing but the best of luck and all the happiness!

Take care,

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-03-31 04:03 AM


Destiny live your dreams,take the plunge,swim in the warm waters of love.

Good luck.

Jon

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-03-31 06:59 AM


Live your dreams and let love help you feel emotion beyond your wildest imagination. Beautiful poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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