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Veil_Gypsy
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail

0 posted 2000-03-28 01:59 PM




Adrift in the river of forever
I find my self in a world of Hares
Yet limitless in my imagination
I often visit her with my crystal visions

I seek the solitude of clouds,
I turn about me
Only to find my self in your pocket
A little trophy of me
If there was a way to find you I would

Hold fast to this place of heaved eye
I long to be there with you
Not to walk among those of shadowed mind
They kill you with there disbelief
I believe in you and your world

Your wings of sliver are like an illumination to me
I watch you as your dainty hands
As you walk about my dollhouse
All aglow with my hopes and wonder

I keep your sweet memory alive in me
My world of wonder will I ever return
I fear not for soon will come the sorrow of age
Were we no longer can imagine fancies of youth
We become the dreamless and the hopeless  

I will keep your memory like child's laughter
That fills the hallways of my soul


 She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy

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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-03-28 04:06 PM


I love how you paint a picture of wonderful fantasy.  Great Work as always!

dhuron

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 2000-03-28 05:19 PM


I find much longing in this piece ...
Wonderful work here Gypsy .....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon






twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
3 posted 2000-03-28 06:50 PM


Sorrow of age ....dreamless and hopeless.....it aint necessarily so Gypsy.
A wistful poem...sad.

Veil_Gypsy
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail
4 posted 2000-03-28 07:45 PM


This poem does have a sense of loss a loss of childhood and its wonder...as we grow older we stop believing I so admire children I see it in my own neices so fearless of what others think and also take everything for everything it has to offer....I simply wrote this from a young womens veiwpoint and facing the loss of her youth

Love Always

The Gypsy Bard


 She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy

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