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Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx

0 posted 2000-03-28 08:56 AM



All my life I had built up a fantasy
of the perfect man.
Countless romance stories and fables
helped make that fantasy a reality in my mind.
Searching for that fantasy lead to many
disappointments.
Reality made it clear that there was no such man.
And as the years went by, the fantasy started
to fade away....until I met you.
I had almost given up on the fantasy until
my fantasy became reality...
that reality became you.


[This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).]

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wonderous
Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75

1 posted 2000-03-28 09:37 AM



I had almost given up on the fantasy until
my fantasy became reality...
that reality became you.

beautiful
i loved it

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-28 11:05 AM


Very beautiful!

Denise

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-03-28 11:08 AM


Great Poem !!!  

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2000-03-29 04:12 AM


Well now!!! So now there's two of us huh!!!!....lol.
Nice poem...great ending Virgo.

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
5 posted 2000-03-29 06:35 AM


Very nice Virgo.  We shouldn't ever stop dreaming.  Without them we have nothing to reach for, look forward to.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-03-29 06:35 AM


How beautiful, I'm glad your fantasy came true.  
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
7 posted 2000-03-29 07:09 AM


Virgo,

Glad your fantasy became reality for you.  We should never give up hope on dreams or fantasies as one day we just might be surprised and find what we have been hoping for.  Beautiful poem.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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