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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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0 posted 2000-03-27 10:07 PM


Sitting in class,
observing the world around
Nature is losing splendor.

Once full of vivacity.
Green, Blue, Yellow
Colors of the Rainbow
Elements of Nature.

Sitting in class,
observing the world around.
Overrun with corruption
while looking outside,
into the forest; I see,
Blue tears fall from our mothers eyes.
Why does she hurt?

She is covered with scars!
Her once beautiful complexion
begins to fade: covered with pollutants.

Sitting in class,
observing the world around
Time is regaining the ice cold grip.

Mother is losing the struggle
What can anyone do
When cries of help
from our mother
Are Not Heard.

Sitting in class,
looking at mother: in pain
I begin to weep with her
when I find the truth.




 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-03-27 10:48 PM


Very well written poem, with very good thoughts. I like it, thanks for sharing it here.
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-28 06:53 AM


Powerful message dhuron.  Our mother is being poisoned by the very children she feeds and clothes.  Talk about biting the hand that feeds you.  Very good poem.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-03-28 07:01 AM


dhuron,

Very poignant.  So sad what we do to Mother Earth.  If we humans don't stop, one day she'll have nothing left.  Very well written.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Denise
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4 posted 2000-03-28 10:52 AM


Great thoughts in this, Dhuron!

Denise

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
5 posted 2000-03-28 01:41 PM


Excellent. You have given Mother Earth a personality. Touching.
twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
6 posted 2000-03-29 04:31 AM


Good poem dhuron
We may ruin her for ourselves, but she will recover and survive even us.

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