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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-03-27 09:22 AM


Birds all-a-flutter
Warm breezes suspending kites
Hearts flame rekindled
Winters frozen feelings thaw
New life inspires Passion!


 Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^)


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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-03-27 09:33 AM


I love it, I love it, I love it, take me higher, awesome I just love it.
Sasikat
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St. Petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-27 11:14 AM


Dennis,

This is absolutely great.  I love the ones that say so much in a little space.  Excellent.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Gene
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3 posted 2000-03-27 01:13 PM


Dennis,

This is superb!  

~Gene

Denise
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4 posted 2000-03-27 01:29 PM


This is wonderful, Dennis!

Denise

Munda
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5 posted 2000-03-27 05:35 PM


Dennis, when will you stop to amaze me ? This is awesome !  
deleeme
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6 posted 2000-03-28 07:11 AM


Dennis,
  You are truly possessed of many talents, and when you stretch your wings to new endeavors, unlike myself and many others, you still fly high.  Soar some more,we'll give you the floor!   David

Pepper
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7 posted 2000-03-28 04:29 PM


Wonderful Dennis !!!
Dennis L. White
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Michigan, U.S.A.
8 posted 2000-03-29 12:13 PM


Kites on breezes fly
Birds sing Springs wonderful songs
I am encouraged
Inspired to sing in words
Poetry for you my friends!

Thank you All for your kind words.
            Dennis :^)

 Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^)


kaile
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9 posted 2000-05-29 01:26 AM


i don't know how i had missed this....so glad i finally get to read it
Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
10 posted 2000-05-30 09:04 AM


All hail Dennis King of Tankas!

Excellent tanka!  I loved it  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
11 posted 2000-05-31 02:50 PM


Thanks for ALL your kind comments,but just to set the record straight Melissa H, I am not the Tanka King, more like the Tanka Clown!!!
LOL Thanks again one and all!
Dennis :^)

  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


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