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Destiny'sChild
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-03-27 03:37 AM


MY WISH TO YOU

into my life so softly you came
without a voice,without a name
you left a trace within my heart
could this be it's torn apart

i lead a life you can't explain
without a voice,without a name
i am the one who speeks to you
in your dreams,fantasy to
without the sun,thair is no shine
could it be true that you are mine

if is so please tell me do
could i be the one for you
you make me laugh
you make me cry
is it so ,could this be why

you are my dreams you are the night
you are everything in my life
so come to me in dreams tonight
if you shant to undelight
i'll have no sun,i'll have no night
i'll have no voice,i'll have no name
i'll have no clue for why you came


                            Destiny



© Copyright 2000 Destiny'sChild - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-03-27 05:33 AM


Dreamy dream.

Great first post

Welcome to the Inn of words.

Jon

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Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-27 07:05 AM


D.S.-

This is lovely.  Nice first post. Welcome to the Pub.

Sheila< !signature-->

 ...the earth and myself are of one mind.  The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same...........    Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-03-27 08:11 AM


This  was  fantastic !!! WElcome to the  pub  great  first post!!!

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-03-27 09:37 AM


Destiny, A gigantic welcome to the pub, I can see you will be blessing our eyes with your wonderful poetry, nice job and welcome again.  

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ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-03-27 09:51 AM


Beautiful poem and great first post! Welcome to Passions, I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2000-03-27 01:09 PM


Destiny,

Great first post. Absolutely beautiful--it has a wonderful flow. Welcome to the Pub.

~Gene

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
7 posted 2000-03-27 01:20 PM


A lovely poem, welcome.
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-03-27 01:42 PM


Beautiful poem, Destiny! Welcome to Passions and to the Pub! Please check you email for a special welcome!

Denise

Destiny'sChild
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 12

9 posted 2000-03-28 01:13 AM


thanks to all of you! I'll be going on vacation so i won't be able to post anything for a while. but i will be back to share more with all of you . thanks agin

                           Destiny

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