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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-26 07:48 PM


Here I Come With A Tall Order To Fill

Here I come with a tall order to fill for all our patrons here
it might have been easier just serving some phony beer
some of you want your pretzels, other's frosted doughnuts
the tallest order for me to fill is getting Chippendale struts

It might have been easier just serving some phony beer
but for prosperity I need to make everything crystal clear
I will comply to all your requests providing no door shuts
try crossing the fine line there will be no ifs and's or buts

Some of you want your pretzels, other's frosted doughnuts
I had the snacks in hand now who sent the hungry mutts
the Chippendale's for some weird reason have a poetic fear
so I arrive empty handed but know I tried maybe next year

The tallest order for me to fill is getting Chippendale struts
can we show them poetry won't make them freeze their butts
with stanza's enticing their endearing bodies to venture near
here I come with a tall order to fill for all our patrons here

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-26 07:52 PM


Hey, Gloria!! This is cute!!

Denise

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-03-26 11:01 PM


Cute! You'll fit right in...I don't drink and have just as much fun as Denise who drinks like a fish! (teasing! Denise...)
Nan
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3 posted 2000-03-26 11:13 PM


Fish drink a lot??? Hmm... I'll take two chipmunks to go please...
Sasikat
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4 posted 2000-03-27 07:24 AM


L.D.-

I agree, this IS really cute.  I'm sure you won't have any trouble filling the orders.  Again, welcome.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

John the cat
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5 posted 2000-03-27 01:54 PM


LOL....I hope to become a regular and loyal patron..any chance of opening a tab?
Pepper
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6 posted 2000-03-28 04:48 PM


Delightful !!
twinsgd
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7 posted 2000-03-28 10:53 PM


Delightful entrance Lost Dreamer
Not to put any pressure on but......lol

Forget the orders for Chippendale struts,
just serve the patrons pretzels and nuts.
But just in case we'll bring the mutts,
to bite the butts of Chippendale struts.
And may I place an order, and please no regrets
for the Radio City Music Hall Rockettes.

Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 2000-03-29 07:21 AM


Denise: Thank You

Sharon: I'm sure I will, I'm already having fun, or maybe I just had a few to many...LOL

Nan: Chipmunks to go? the pet stores down a few buildings...LOL

Sheila: Thanks, yes time heals all fears  

John: I check with the management on that, but you'll probably need to keep it under your hat...LOL

Pepper: Thank You, I'm glad you enjoyed  

twinsgd: We could have a night for each, you can just stay home the night the Chippendale's come and keep your dogs with you!...LOL... Dialing the phone checking the schedule for your: Radio City Music Hall Rockettes.

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