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Chico
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-03-26 05:02 PM

THE FLOWER !

So there I sit;
   With a flower in my hand.
As I slowly write;
   Her name in the sand...
I'm playing the game;
   I played as a tot;
Chanting she loves me.
   She loves me not.
But this time it's not for the girl;
   With freckles on her face
But for the one I love;
   The one my dreams chase.

So I'm asking the flower;
   If Avei loves me;
cause I don't have the power;
   To ask her myself.

And For once the flower;
   Tells me yes;
So I decide to ask her,
   To get rid of this stress.
But the next time I see her;
   My heart begins to race.
And I can't bring myself,
   to look her in the face
So I pass her by;
   Without a word;
Without a try;
   My whole body trembles;
my heart begins to cry.
   The anger rises within.
And I ask myself why.
   I see my dreams fading
And my courage begins to die.
   I feel I am trading;
the truth for a lie.

  The lie that tells me.
That she doesn't care.
   And that if I asked her;
I would just get a stare

But I don't want to be a fool;
   And let my dreams die.
So I think I'll give it;
   At least one more try;
So pray for me;
   that I'll get the courage;
To make her see.
   That I love her.
I love her dearly...

                                   -CHICO

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

1 posted 2000-03-26 05:29 PM

Another good one Chico...Just remember, 'Faint heart ne'r won fair lady.'

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2000-03-26 06:14 PM

Yes, another good one

Chico, will you please check your e-mail ?

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-26 07:34 PM

Great poem, Chico! Go ahead, ask her! It's the only way to find out!

Denise

Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

4 posted 2000-03-26 08:18 PM

Hey thank you all for responding, and munda, I did not get anything so if you could try again, my address is D1R6C@aol.com. thank you...

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 2000-03-26 08:59 PM

Very nice poem, I hope you take that risk.

freckles
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 160
Virginia USA

6 posted 2000-03-26 09:17 PM

Chico--Great poem!! I know the pain that the feared response would bring, but remember, "nothing ventured, nothing gained." Best of luck to you!!

"Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

7 posted 2000-03-27 07:28 AM

Chico,

Beautiful poem. If you don't make an attempt to ask, you may regret it the rest of you life. Hope you get the answer you want!

Sheila

...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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