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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Streaming, Dreaming Cold. Damn this cold, it's getting worse, Draining energies and stealing verse, As quickly as they come to mind, They cease to be, are hard to find. So hard so hard to concentrate, Thoughts of you do infiltrate, This sluggish mind, This dull mind's-eye, No matter how hard I try To banish you from my thought, With sweet vision of you, I'm always caught. Yes you, sweet you, so far away, In land I'd love to see one day, Although perhaps I never will, I'll dream and dream am dreaming still. |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
john, that cold is playing tricks on you, there is no girl your dreaming, nice, I like this |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is cute! I hope you feel better soon! Denise |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
John, I think this is adorable. Hope you get over the cold soon. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
John.....you are right, all my girls are in my dreams  Denise, Sheila.....Thank you for your wishes. There is no cold, I feel fine |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
John - you like writing about this cold/flu bug don't you?? This is really cute!! By the by - someties dreams cn seem so real. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Childomine....sometimes reality is so surreal. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
John.....do you really have a cold? Or are you shopping for sympathy ....no girl.....LOL Cute poem John |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Love is no dream =] ¤¤Swamp¤¤ |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
twnsgd.....No, no cold and I'm not sure about the girl...lol Swamp...I agree, love is no dream. The realisation of it is something else May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
John--This is wonderful (as are all of your poems). It's amazing how the mind can conjure up what the heart desires. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
No cold bug, no girl? All an illusion of mind, wow, can I have a referral? You have me walking away blind one day hoping your autograph signed. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I hope you feel better soon. Colds are sooo nasty. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Freckles & Lost dreamer, I am extremely flattered, thank you. Perhaps one day I shall aspire to your heights. ESP....I have no cold, I feel quite well, A little old, It's true to tell, I shall survive, And write again, But no more colds, I pray amen May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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