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KimW
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0 posted 2000-03-25 06:26 PM


The Instrument plays

Music breathes in life
mental state -
relates
to the transitions
of sound.

Kdw, Copyright 3/25/00


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childomine
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1 posted 2000-03-25 07:48 PM


"Mental state-
relates
to the transition of sounds"


and colors -
and textures -
and visual stimuli -

I like this Kim.


 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


JOY 14
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2 posted 2000-03-25 08:04 PM


Short and sweet, but music to my ears!  Very good Kim!  

Joy

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-03-25 11:17 PM


Kim,
Beautiful music....I hear it loud and clear.  Great poem!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-03-26 11:37 AM


Sometimes I write poetry while listening to music...love your poem..it's so true.
Jonas
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5 posted 2000-03-26 11:39 AM


Very beautiful Kim....so much of what I have written came from the music I was listening to.

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-26 02:20 PM


This is lovely Kim! Music can be such a great inspiration!   Maybe I should listen to more music!  

Denise

Gene
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7 posted 2000-03-26 05:59 PM


Short, but very sweet music.  

~Gene

KimW
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8 posted 2000-03-26 08:36 PM


Thank you to all of you for you comments  

So much of what I write is as peaceful as the music that I am listening to. Music can be an Incredible Inspiration in many ways.

I was listening to some absolutely beautiful music and these words just wrote themselves.

Kim

Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 2000-03-26 08:51 PM


your ears and mind work keenly together, I loved this one.
Sasikat
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10 posted 2000-03-27 04:59 PM


Kim,

This is a great piece.  Poetry is the lyrics to the music.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

KimW
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11 posted 2000-03-28 04:27 PM


Thank you Lost Dreamer and Sasikat!  

Sometimes the simplest words, have great meaning (s)!

Kim

Munda
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12 posted 2000-03-28 04:41 PM


Sounds like music to my ears  
passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-12-25 09:58 AM


nice!
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