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First Time Love

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2000-03-24 04:03 PM

For the first time in my dismal life
I feel love flow in my heart
the same heart once thought cold and lifeless
fills with glorious joy and happiness
because of a woman
whose spirit is full of passion
her eyes that shine like saphire stars
filled with warmth and beauty
a smile that brings happiness to my sad existance
I have never known love until now
because of the way she touched my heart
took hold of my depressed soul
and showed me the beauty of life's wonders
everything that I thought impossible
all seems to be within my grasp
I see everything in a new light
because of something I thought unworthy to feel
to feel love's tender kiss
and I bask in its beauty so
because of the feelings of a woman
whom I would love now and til
my heart beats it's final note to life's great song

To find true love is to know true happiness... to lose true love is to lose everything

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-24 04:14 PM

This is beautiful, Lonely Shadow! Great writing!

Denise

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2000-03-24 07:50 PM

I love this Loney Shadow !

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

3 posted 2000-03-24 10:46 PM

This was great, I can very easily relate good job expressing emotions

"A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-25 07:51 AM

Very beautiful. Love has the power to fill the most dismal life with vibrant colors and rich scents. Aaah - the joy that from love, there is nothing to compare.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-03-26 11:34 AM

Nothing better in the world than to feel like this..

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