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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-23 07:50 PM


labour of love

tucked back
behind overgrown shrubs
and bushes and trees
was this little cottage
right off a dirt track
three miles from a tiny village
near the edge
of the highlands of Scotland

it was love
from the moment we saw
the sturdy rock walls
the rotting thatched roof
and the wakening spring flowers
obviously  once a much loved home
even after neglect and abandon
it held it's grace and charm
still

for a tiny sum
we claimed ownership
of our lifetime dream

all the while
suffering laughs and derision
for buying "Widow March's Hut"

behind their backs we laughed too
for no amount of money
could pay for what we had just bought

home

after months of work
and many callouses and splinters
a beautiful haven was created
a place for babies and grandchildren
for ponies and baby chicks

the garden, was left a bit wild still
in honour of the cottage's past
while along the far fence
a profusion of trumpet vine
wrapped it's tendrils
over everything in it's path

throughout, wildflowers grew
in a mish mash of hue and texture
gaily painting the garden scene
in floral profusion of colour

our love built this sanctuary
nothing more
for without the love cultivated here
this would be only a house
made of rock and wood






[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 03-23-2000).]

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-23 07:55 PM


Beautiful poem, X Angel! You've painted a lovely scene!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-23 08:20 PM


Yes Angel, you have painted a beautiful scene.  You make it sound so welcoming - built on and maintained by love.  Very nice.< !signature-->

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
          Black Eagle
    Oglala Sioux holy man



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Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-03-24 05:16 AM


Angel, this is beauiful. I love how you write a free verse.  
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-03-24 07:43 AM


Angel,

I could picture this as if I were actually there.  How beautiful it must be and the most special part is all the love in and around it.

Sheila

 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
5 posted 2000-03-24 12:45 PM


As of right now, this is a dream unrealised. Maybe someday.......
*sigh*

Thanks Denise...I wish I COULD paint!

childomine....isn't that what home should be built on? A mansion means nothing if love doesn't live there too.  

Munda...you'll do well, practice-practice-practice! Besides you did great on your last attempt. I loved it. Thanks  

Sasi..I *WISH*!!   Someday eh?  

~X~

[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 03-24-2000).]

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
6 posted 2000-03-24 12:53 PM


X angel I love this poem..the topic...hte description the style....reminds me of one of my favourite Australian poets Judith Wright...you have the same gift to transform a plain subject into something memorable..

our love built this sanctuary...

what a wonderful line  

Thanks for posting this poem

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle


Poertree
Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
7 posted 2000-03-25 03:10 PM


Heather ... you'll only know how close you were when i send the pics ...lol:

"was this little cottage
right off a dirt track
three miles from a tiny village
near the edge
of the highlands of Scotland

it was love
from the moment we saw
the sturdy rock walls"

mind you the walls are, shall I say, "lacking" ..lol theres only ONE !!

but the view .... whew !! and the edge of the Highlands is spot on!

(Thatch is very rare in Scotland though - i think the climate is wrong and its not traditional).

The poem itself was marvellous and timely because it's made me even more determined to press on with this "crazy" project ..lol ..

I'll keep you informed ..... take care

Philip

X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
8 posted 2000-03-25 03:12 PM


THATCH!
drat! I missed that one...and I can't wait for the pics!
H

Poertree
Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
9 posted 2000-03-25 03:23 PM


H .... just read again and noticed this:

"all the while
suffering laughs and derision
for buying "Widow March's Hut""

>>> so scared of this are we that we're not telling anyone .. and don't you dare laugh when you see it ...lol

P


X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
10 posted 2000-03-25 03:27 PM


I won't laugh Philip I swear..I want one too! Maybe someday my coffee business will allow me the luxury of my dream cabin too.

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