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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
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Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-23 05:23 PM


My Angel

Her delicate hand
grasped mine tenderly;
And with a finger to her lips
she quieted the turmoil
that raged within.

She beckoned me;
Her hypnotic eyes,
shining with an ethereal glow,
and led me out of the shadows
of my loneliness.

I followed my beautiful,
golden tressed angel,
into a bright and shining world
of love, warmth, and boundless joy.

It was she, My Angel
with her feathery soft whispers
of encouragement and love,
who rescued me from my prison;
And from myself.

© 3/23/00
Gary Pence
For my beloved Kim. My angel, my rescuer, my love…..


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 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe



[This message has been edited by Jonas (edited 03-23-2000).]

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wonderous
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 75

1 posted 2000-03-23 06:01 PM


beautifully written i m sure kim will love it

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2000-03-23 06:08 PM


This is Beautiful Jonas. I love it !
Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-03-23 06:14 PM


Gary, This is absolutely beautiful.  

~Gene

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
4 posted 2000-03-23 07:15 PM


Thank you everyone. This is only one of many that I will write. And just as love grows ever more joyous, so will my words.

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-23 07:38 PM


This is just beautiful, Gary! Very lovely!

Denise

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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
6 posted 2000-03-23 08:23 PM


Gary this is so touching.  You and Kim always express your love for one another so beautifully.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
7 posted 2000-03-23 10:12 PM


Thank you Denise and childomine!

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
8 posted 2000-03-23 11:50 PM


Jonas this was beautiful !! Great writing  

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
9 posted 2000-03-24 02:03 AM


Gary,
I hope I always make you smile. Always make you feel warm, loved, and supportive. No matter what life throws our way I shall always hold your heart tenderly in my hands.

I heart u!

Kim

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
10 posted 2000-03-24 08:35 AM


StarrGazer, Thank you for your kind words!

Darling Kim, You always make me smile. And I will always be by your side; watching over you, loving you, and protecting you.

I heart U too love!

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
11 posted 2000-03-24 12:48 PM


Oh wow..that is just so beautiful!!!

It gives me a lovely warm feeling inside to see people express their love to one another in this way  

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle


twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
12 posted 2000-03-25 10:27 AM


Aw shucks!! the boy's in love

Nice way to tell her Jonas

freckles
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
13 posted 2000-03-25 10:55 AM


Gary--This is so beautiful.  What a wonderful way to express your love!

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
14 posted 2000-03-25 01:05 PM


Thank you Tess and freckles!

twinsgd....been a long time since anyone called me a boy. LOL! Thank You  

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


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