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kaile
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0 posted 2000-03-23 12:08 PM


Under the deep blue sea,
Vibrant coloured fishes scream in glee
On an giant octopus roundabout

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-23 02:26 PM


This is beautiful, kaile!  

Denise

childomine
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2 posted 2000-03-23 08:47 PM


This makes me think of fun!  I enjoyed it!

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
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Gene
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3 posted 2000-03-23 09:20 PM


Very cute poem.  
~Gene

Munda
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4 posted 2000-03-24 05:38 AM


I like this !  
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