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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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In my heart there dwells a light One that has been hidden from my sight Hidden by hate and devoid of love Waiting for that angel, sent from above She came to me as if out of a dream Pierced through the darkness with her love's beam Showed me the things I'd lost for so long Gave me back my voice, to sing with her our song The alarm shrieked its hollow, lonely wail Waking me from my sleep, lonely and pale When I looked around, things were still the same But I swear in the distance, I heard her call my name. ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....hauntingly beautiful poem. You say a lot in a little space. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You did hear my calling then? Geez and I thought I was the only physic around!! LOL Thanks Sven for your friendship and strength and love  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Sven! Absolutely wonderful! Denise |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Hi again I did enjoy this...so ethereal and dreamy...and ending on the postive ote of hope Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Sven great job "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. .. LW, I try. . . Isis, I can always hear your calling my friend. . . and thank you for your friendship. . . Denise, thank you . . . wonderful is my middle name!! LOL Tess, I've been told that I do dreams well. .. Starr, thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Everyone else has pretty well summed it up. This is very, very good. The last line leaves me with the impression that, although the dreamer believes it to be, maybe this wasn't a dream afterall. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Sven, What a wonderful dream, but you know, dreams do come true. Hope this one does for you. This is beautiful. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Dreams are weird, sometimes you wake up and can't remember if it was true or not! Good poem ~X~ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem Sven, I really enjoyed reading it. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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