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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-22 03:53 PM


A hopeless soul inspiring hope?
Strange as it sounds,yet you help me cope
When ever I feel I can't go on
Your memory holds me safely 'til dawn
When ever I feel sad, it's true
My thoughts automatically shift to you
The power to make me smile- yours alone
Light in the darkness?-who'd have ever known?
But fate somehow threw us together
Now my heart is eternally yours- forever
Hopefully I inspire the same feelings as you do for me
I'd give my own life if it meant you could be free of misery
Bound with bonds that refuse to be broken
Love that stays  strong, no words need to be spoken
It must have been fate- maybe destiny
That made you a part of my life- that brought you to me




< !signature-->

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~




[This message has been edited by StarrGazer (edited 03-22-2000).]

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William P Bussey
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

1 posted 2000-03-22 05:22 PM


A beautiful set of words, you are no doubt very much in love, if not you should be.  bill
Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-22 05:49 PM


This is a really beautiful poem, Starrgazer!

Denise

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-03-22 06:03 PM


Beautiful, Starr.  Straight from the heart.  

~Gene



StarrGazer
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Posts 679
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4 posted 2000-03-23 01:16 PM


Thanks to all of you for replying in love hmmmm maybe lol kind of expressing my appreciation for a really great friend < !signature-->

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~




[This message has been edited by StarrGazer (edited 03-27-2000).]

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
5 posted 2000-03-24 07:29 AM


you've written a nice piece about someone obviously very important to you.  Hopefully he'll stop by, at least for a bit of reading.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Tess
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
6 posted 2000-03-24 12:57 PM


Well i hope he does come and see it..he is missing out on a great poem and tribute if he doesnt!!

hopless soul inspiring hope...l like this part...makes me think of someone who feels they have nothing to give you but in giving you part of themselves can help you go on....

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle


tom
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 90
s/w penna u.s.a.
7 posted 2000-03-25 01:19 PM


Wonderful piece of work Star,you should be
proud.

  tom

 all day-every day

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
8 posted 2000-03-25 02:28 PM


Tess you kinda hit the nail right on the head he has depression that is as bad if not worse than mine but somehow through him I'm inspired to hope ....

Tom - thanks  

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2000-03-26 11:35 AM


Never give up hope....and when you find someone that can help you fulfill your destiny hold on tight!  
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
10 posted 2000-03-27 12:46 PM


This is a lovely poem. Truly lovely. Keep posting em!
Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
11 posted 2000-03-27 04:42 PM


Starr,

So much emotion here.  Very beautiful.  

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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