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just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-22 02:42 PM


I told you everything
about me and him
I told you things
from deep within
Things with you
i only shared
and stupid me
i thought u cared
I told you things
he said when we talked
I cried to you
when we fought
i told you
how i felt inside
i told you
all the reasons i cried
you said you didnt want to hurt me
so you lied
if your only friends
tell me.......whats there to hide?
"is there really a you and him"
thats what you said
"or is it your imagination Ang"
is what i read
how could you not believe
all that i have said
do you really think
this is all in my head?
that one sentence
is all you needed to say
now i see you
the real way
Another "friend"
i thought i had
Another "friendship"
gone bad.....how sad


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
1 posted 2000-03-22 03:41 PM


Great poem and very sad when you put your trust in someone only to find them  undeserving of that very trust

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



William P Bussey
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

2 posted 2000-03-22 05:34 PM


It's tough having to grow up, we have all been down that road, life's a bitch,but it gets better, learn and you will be happy.
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-03-22 06:09 PM


Angie, Sad, but very nice poem.

~Gene

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-03-22 07:53 PM


Angie,
Sad poem.  Hope it is not a true one.  It is frustrating when people you think care do not believe you.  There are way better friends than that out there.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-03-22 08:07 PM


When you find a friend you think you can trust
And they betry you in a rush
Don't get discouraged
Real friends last
Through happiness and tears
And of course will be there for you in a second flat!

Joy

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2000-03-22 08:24 PM


So sorry if this is a true poem! Noone deserves to be treated in this manner. I say dump this person, for they do not deserve you! Move on to people who do! Very good poem  

Take care,
AMY

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
7 posted 2000-03-22 08:45 PM


A great poem..and one which I think many of us can relate to..when you finally reveal your inner thoughts to someone and they betray you..you wonder how you could be so silly...but it's their loss..not yours

Take care

Tess  

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

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