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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2000-03-21 01:10 PM





When I look into my mirror
I see you mother
All your faults
In bold letters
Those faults I claimed
I would never have.
They stare at me
In glaring letters!
Is this the punishment
I get for all your faults
I pointed out to you
So freely, when I was young.

Or, perhaps I can blame
It on genetics.
You never offered an excuse
You just took my big mouth blabber
Of my teenage years.

It's so puzzling now to me
For all your faults I claimed
I would never have
Time and life
Have engraved them on my mirror
I was so naive to think
I was nearly always
Making right turns
And now
I have woken up to find
I have come full circle,
When your face is the
One I see in my mirror.



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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-21 01:48 PM


We thought we were so wise when we were young, didn't we? I, too, see traits of my parents in me, the good and not so good. I relish both as they are my connnection with them even though they are both gone now. Life is a circle, that's true! Great poem, Septsong!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-21 08:27 PM


This is excellent Septsong!  The saying "the apple doesn't fall far from the tree" is truer than most would like to admit.  I see the same thing (my mom) when I look in the mirror.  The kicker is that I see me in my children and them in my grandaughter!!  Enjoyed this very much!!

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


William P Bussey
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

3 posted 2000-03-22 05:31 PM


This reminds me of a time long ago, 1952 to be exact, I had come back from Korea, my Dad and I were riding our horses, I talked to him and could not believe how smart he had gotten in just a year,,this is very nice...bill
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