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KimW
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0 posted 2000-03-19 07:10 PM


Brush moves; fervent speed
Flying wings flutter loudly
Heaven’s goddess leaves


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-19 07:16 PM


Beautiful, Kim!

Denise

childomine
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2 posted 2000-03-19 07:21 PM


Ah - everyone seems to be on a haiku roll!!  Very nice!
Aimster
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3 posted 2000-03-19 08:09 PM


Kim:

This is impressive! You go girl! I can't do haiku...this is quite beautiful.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

KimW
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Medford, Oregon, USA
4 posted 2000-03-19 11:11 PM


Denise, Thank you so much !

childomine - thank you ;0) I am practicing and fine tuning Haiku  

Awwwwwww Amy - I did not think I could either! Thank you for such kind words!!  

(IF I can do it, anyone can!)

Kim

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