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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-19 06:28 PM


Candle Glow

Your eyes sparkle
with reflected light
The candle’s glow
becoming green flames
Casting loves shadows
on the canvas of my mind

A single beautiful moment
in the flowing river of time
A warm candlelit dream
held for all eternity
Deep within the walls
of my beating heart

© 3/19/00
Gary Pence




 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-19 07:14 PM


Oh Gary, this is soooooo beautiful! Romantic!

Denise

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-19 07:18 PM


Gary you are such a romantic!!  Whomever it is that evokes this in you is one lucky person!
I love the following;

"Casting loves shadows
on the canvas of my mind."

Once again - a superb poem!!

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-03-19 08:29 PM


Gary,

Oh wow!! This was so beautiful...I can feel my heart melting, and no its not from the candle lol. Your poem touched my heart completely. Thanks so much for sharing.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
4 posted 2000-03-19 09:54 PM


Thank you! Yes, I do love romance!  
Another Heather
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 93
Canada
5 posted 2000-03-20 04:28 AM


Well, I certainly agree with the others here, very beautiful. This is one of those "I wish someone wrote that for me" poems. Well Done Jonas!

 "Be yourself... No matter what they say"
- Sting

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