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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
I read a story and there were two of them One was afraid of the obvious, he stayed within his realm of comfort. The other was as beautiful as a bird, but her wings wouldn't fly, So she was only a lover in a pale blue dress. I'm just a dreamer, you tell the best lies to me. Your face, it shows what you think I don't see And why can't I say what I mean? Instead of playing those games like we do, We hide our tears behind our hands and keep going. I'm desiring to live without it's remains Cause I'm just a dreamer, That's what I'll always be. If you could just say it If you just say the words If you could just say... I'm a coffee addict with a simple smile, I love old clothes and flannel pajamas. Sometimes I get lonely. But I believe in life, and you've got a beautiful smile. I capture what I can, When the time is right I'll know. I just keep waiting for that moment Waiting for something I don't think I am sure of. Like a lover...In a pale blue dress... "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem Heather! Well written! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Heather, I enjoyed your piece ...  I especially like your last two lines... tied it all in neatly ... Thank you for sharing ...... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Enjoyed your poem a lot. I too am a coffee, flannel pj kind of gal but even we dream of waiting "Like a lover...in a pale blue dress..." |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
thanks everyone. this one was basically my fairy tale, mixed in with some real-life. "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Your face it shows what you think I don't see. I love that line. Deception wears a thin veil doesn't it. Great Jon |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Heather, I read and re-read your words, sometimes things get a little to deep for this old Marine and I have to do a search. I think you touch each of our failings in some way, also our dreams, You seem wistful, so I concluded part of this was the real you. Great job....bill |
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