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JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-18 07:20 PM

I hope you people are not sick of my tries at haikus yet, because I don't give up too easily.

Gentle fingers press
Onto leaves of fresh, green life
Nature's touch caress

Tapping dancers step
Rain drops described to move free
Pelting wet on stones

Thanks for reading! Don't worry I won't put you through too much more of this. There are plenty of other talented haiku oriented poets here for you to enjoy. And I can't wait to go back to my free style, (don't worry 'bout the sylables) poetry. But DON'T think I won't stop writing haikus and trying other kinds of poetry.

Joy

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-18 07:47 PM

These are great Joy! Don't stop!!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-03-18 11:22 PM

These ARE very good Joy. I've noticed a BIG change from the first to these. Excellent and - don't stop now, you've got it!!!!

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2000-03-19 11:06 AM

Hey, thanks very much! I'm glad. And I knew I would get it..... eventualy. lol!

Joy

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

4 posted 2000-03-19 06:25 PM

Joy,

I can tell you've been studying haiku. These are great. Keep 'em coming.

~Gene

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