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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Lily - white, floating Random movements and adrift. Alone in wet world. jk |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I could see a lone lily floating on the water, being carried further and further away.... Joy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely, Joannak! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ A lovely Haiku. Perfectly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
You've painted a very serene picture. Beautifully tranquil. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Very delicate. You grace the style and make it look easy. I look forward to reading more from you. INclan |
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Die In Vain Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 15B.C., Canada |
I have a question, I don't really understand what a Haiku is. Do you think you can explain it to me. Is it hard to do? I remember it in school. But I don't think I ever tried to do it. Is it hard? I did like what you wrote. I would like to learn how to do it. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Die In Vain, I have recently become interested in haikus myself and have begun to learn the style to write them. If you would like advice about them be sure to ask u_gene, Marge, or anyone else who has mastered this form of poetry. I'm sure they would be glad to answer any questions. Joy |
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