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kaile
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0 posted 2000-03-18 12:31 PM


Grey sky casts shadow
Pounding rain!Ouch!Darts for cover

The last drizzle ends

Spectrum of colours.Warm feel
Smile.A pot of gold,perhaps?  

this is in response to your poem "suffer in silence"...hope u feel better  ")

incidentally,this is entitled "Enlightenment"


[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 03-18-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-18 12:49 PM


I like this! A happy little poem!

Denise

INclan
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2 posted 2000-03-18 11:26 PM


Interesting....made me think.  Thank you for sharing your talents.

INclan

Munda
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3 posted 2000-03-20 06:09 AM


This is lovely ! But did freckles see this ?
I better send you back up !  

freckles
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4 posted 2000-03-20 01:44 PM


kaile--Thank you so much.  Again I must say that the support that I have received has been heart-warming.  I enjoyed "Enlightenment."  Munda--No, I had not seen this until a friend let me know it was here; thanks for "sending kaile back up."    < !signature-->

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

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