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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Bolt up with a start Rub eyes.Jaws drop.Stare in awe. Grinning elf says "Hi" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is cute!  Denise |
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why not Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 10 |
 I love surprises! MOOORRREEE!!! why not |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Brought a smile to my face!!  Look forward to more! |
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Die In Vain Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 15B.C., Canada |
I liked it. Cute. can I ask a stupid question here though, I'm very new to writing poetry. Been only doing it for a few months. Is this a certain type of poetry writing. I'm curious. I know there are many forms of poetry writing. I still don't get some of it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
one of my first attempts in haiku..i will like to ask: if this considered a senyru since it includes short phrases instead of a single thought(within each line) thanx for your help |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
hello little elf what a pleasure to meet you do stay for breakfast -vlraynes kaile- this is really cute. i love it. hope to see more of these from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Little elf of self A hello right back to you Pretty neat Senryu !  ~*Marge*~ *Haiku usually written about thoughts of nature *Senryu about other things Nonetheless ... a fun little piece. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Because of my shot attention span short stories suit me just fine, God imaginative work here! Dennis :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love this, soooofun! great job! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I may have met this elf last night!! LOL Well done kaile!!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is definitely interesting! Wonder if you've already read Harry Potter when you wrote this... I remember seeing a troll mentioned somewhere in the series...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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