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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-17 10:17 PM


Her Power

Your warm fingertips
press lightly against mine
Sending tingling sensations
throughout my body
Awakening within me
such hunger and desire
that I lose all control

Your delicate touch
overwhelms my senses
As hypnotic green eyes
draw me ever deeper
into your passionate world
Taking me mind and soul

I surrender willingly
to your power over me
Melting into you
as your very essence
consumes me
An undying desire to be yours
my last coherent thought

© 3/17/00
Gary Pence



 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-17 10:42 PM


This is so passionate, Gary! Well written!

Denise

WhisperingWind
Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-03-18 07:32 AM


Wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading.  
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-03-18 08:10 AM


Gary, once again you've done a fine job of building a vivid picture with your words.  VERY sensual.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-03-20 06:01 AM


Great poem Jonas  
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