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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Slimy leach wriggle Face passive,the tortoise's still Resigned to its fate |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this worked for me, was short but held a powerful message nonetheless. The poor turtoise..will he EVER get a fair chance in life. Thanks for posting. AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Great one, kaile. I have to say, your haiku are some of the most imaginative. ~Gene |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Good haiku. Someties I feel like the poor turtle!  |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Kind of a hopeless situation here...and I have never seen anything like it in a haiku, that's for sure! So much meaning behind this! Great job, kaile!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for replying.... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! I really liked this one. So creative.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Nice contrast here, how did I miss this one? Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
great images!!..well done, Kaile the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Very well done, Kaile...I love the image here. ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This just reminds me of some people, hypocrites i guess, who sucks the living daylights out of those who feed them with info and who treat them as friends. When they 'die', these leeches will then abandon the host, and look for someone new to cling on to. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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