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Merlynne Junior Member
since 2000-03-17
Posts 16 |
Only You Only you can see me you only I can see you grace my soul alone tied we are gracious Only your eyes can mystify mine ours mystified intensely deep Away I go into mist vanish vapor into mist I go away |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is so clever!!!i have been trying this form of poetry but sad to say, i have failed  I really like the 3rd stanza..well done!  |
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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
I have never read a poem of that style before. It was written very well. Will enjoy reading more of your work. ~Whispers~ |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
you said alot ina a few words. i like this poem and i really like the style rich-pa |
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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
Just wanted to say, Welcome to passions |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Welcome to Passions. I like this style too. Enjoyed the poem and look forward to reading more. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Welcome to Passions, Merlynne! You seem to embrace this style; I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more by you (of any style). "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email. This is a lovely poem..... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a lovely poem Merlynne. Welcome to the Pub. |
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