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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
-Intence Feelings- I lay here tonight Staring around the darkened room Unable to sleep Toss'n Turn'n Tears a roll'n Face burning With angry feelings Hurt heart Never healing Hidden feelings Never tell'n Think'n Wait'n Hope'n Scream'n Head pounding Veins pulsing... Slowly, Slowly Everything spin'n Faster, Faster ....then relaxing. ~WhisperingWind~ Aug/09/1999. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
whisper this had a lot of feelings and emotions packed into it! i have had my share of sleepless nights as well. hope things get better! take care, awesome poem...i really liked the writing style. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very intense poem Whispering Wind. As I read it I could feel the emotion building up in me. Good job! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, I've lost sleep over poems before...but I've never read a poem about losing sleep, especially with one full of such feeling! Wond'rous poem, Whispering Wind!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I like the style you used here W.W. .... I can definetly identify with this piece ... You might want to correct the title's spelling though ... intense ... I really enjoyed the read ..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Pepper. I never realized the spelling was incorrect, but I think I'll leave it. I like the look of the C instead of S. Thank you everyone for your reply's. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
*gulp* How much I've been in the same situation, WW. I wish I could give you a hug and tell you everything will be all right in the morning, but I have no way of doing that since I cannot fortell the future. So, accept this simple 'I'm here with you' as my reply... --Jamie  |
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