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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Vibrant emerald Shoots forth, rising, stretching, free Springs to new life, grass! Humidity hangs Stifling, searing, glorious Swimming pool relief! Tree colors ablaze Leaf fires, pungent, sweet smoke Too close, teary eyes! Frosty, crisp, cold air Ice crystals, winters web spun On my windshield form! (my humble response to the Haiku challenge) < !signature--> Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
These are great, Dennis. Really excellent!  They really capture a moment in time. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! These are great Dennis! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Indeed...nicely done! INclan |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hey, liked these. And they certainly met the haiku form better than mine. But I didn't know then what I know now! Joy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ These are wonderful moments you've captured. I caution ... they are addicting ! Too soon it's time for mowing Grass grows overnight ~*~ Moon walks hand in hand with stars Across Milky Way ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank you all for your encouraging comments, I will try to write more of these in the future. Thanks again! Dennis :^) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
These are great Dennis !  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice ones indeed...esp enjoyed the first and the last haiku...like the image of new life spouting and the line "winters web spun" is ingenious!!wish i had thought of that  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I loved all of your amazing haikus! My favourite is vibrant emerald shoots forth, rising, stretching, free springs to new life, grass! Excellent imagery and a great way of bringing grass to life for us! Wow, Dennis, you really have a talent for haikus! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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