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Even shorter than a haiku!)

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Ted Reynolds
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0 posted 03-13-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ted Reynolds

We spring into summer
and fall into winter!

© Copyright 2000 Ted Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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1 posted 03-13-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Brief, Bravo! Dennis :^)
Gene
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2 posted 03-13-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

This may not be in the traditional form, but it's very well put. So much said in so few words--and all 4 seasons. Great!  

~Gene
Denise
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3 posted 03-13-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Way to go, Ted!! This is great!!

Denise
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4 posted 03-13-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for Sasikat   Email Sasikat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sasikat

This is great Ted.  So much covered in 8 little words.

Sheila

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JOY 14
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5 posted 03-13-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

So true, Ted.  Cute!

Joy
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6 posted 03-13-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You do have a way with words Ted.  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 03-13-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ted~
Adorable ... and well done.

For you -

Spring forward in time
Daylight savings soon to be
Daylight will linger

~*Marge*~


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8 posted 03-13-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

I can't top the other coments so I'll just say - this is cute Ted.  A man of few words?
Ted Reynolds
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9 posted 03-14-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

Thanks, all.  It's just amazing what can happen if you shuffle words around in your head long enough.  The pattern in those English words was always there, waiting, and I was lucky enough to be dealt it.
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10 posted 03-14-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Bravo! Bravo!
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11 posted 06-24-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

this is so cute Ted..this definitely warrants a reply!!!

this is probably the shortest sweet poem i have read!

for you:
Winter falls~
How time flies~
Summer springs
brian madden
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12 posted 06-24-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

and it is shorter than a haiku. clever.
I liked it alot


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yep!
 
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