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A Way With Words

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

0 posted 2000-03-13 04:49 AM

Mutilation
Razor words
Cutting,slashing,exposing sinew nerves
The flesh of response
The cursed look
Erupting rage
The corkscrew shout
Pulling,drawing poison
From you very soul
The innards of your being

Vengence born on your tounge
Dies on you lips

Redemtion
The salty regret
Of speaking with your mouth
Not with you heart
The ricochet recoil of sorrow
Pleading for recognition
Through misty foam filled eyes

But you accept chaos
You have a way with words

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-03-13 07:03 AM

Jon,

Very powerful expression here and very well written.

Sheila

...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-13 02:31 PM

Ah, if we could all only think before we speak....not always an easy thing. Great poem, Jon!

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-03-13 03:58 PM

Hi Everyone

Sorry about the errors in this script.
It doesn't pay to rush.

GREAT TO BE BACK

JON

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 2000-03-13 05:19 PM

Sounds like the person who wrote this has a definite way with words also.

Joy

Another Heather
Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 93
Canada

5 posted 2000-03-14 01:16 AM

"Vengence born on your tongue
Dies on your lips"
Now those are great words. Very good words indeed, Jon!

"Be yourself... No matter what they say"
- Sting

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