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Marge Tindal
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Haiku To You
~*Marge Tindal*~


  

Spring twitters it's song
Urging flowers forth to spring
Birds of feather flock



Oaken limb of tree
Bends with the blow of the wind
Boughs bow gracefully



Shades of sunlight rise
On break of morning sunrise
Beauty lights my eyes



Glad to share with you
Tiny bits of my Haiku
See what you can do


*Thanks to U_Gene for the invitation to the Pub



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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why not
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How do you do that? Beautiful poems and also the presentation- I must admit IŽd go for a simpler version- but still it is cute. The bird seems to "twitter" the lines.

why not
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Marge,

What a beautiful presentation.  You did great at the expression in this Haiku.  Glad you are posting at the Pub.

Sheila



 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief
Marge Tindal
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WhyNot~
Glad you enjoyed.  This little bird just seems to fit the Haiku.  I enjoy 'dressing' up some of my poetry.  Ahhhh ... he does seem to 'twitter'.


SasiKat~
Thank you for liking and for the warm welcome to the pub.
I hope we will also see some Haiku
from you.
~*Marge*~


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Lancelot
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Marge,
These are beautiful. Great presentation. I love the bird. Oh, "twitter." I thought you said, Tweety. LOL


Everyone, take note of this example...this is how to write Haiku!

~Lance



[This message has been edited by Lancelot (edited 03-13-2000).]
Dennis L. White
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Marge,
  This was SOOOOO good! Thank you for sharing these treasures! Dennis :^)
Gene
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Marge, Thanks for dropping in. This is really beautiful. Excellent.

Don't be a stranger,
there's always room in the Pub;
you and your haiku


----
Gene
Marge Tindal
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Lance~
Thank you for the accolades.
For you -

Face of daffodil
Smiles at glow of morning sun
Ah! Spring has begun


Dennis~
Thank you for liking.

For you -

Afternoon delight
Shades of spring's blooming color
The world is aglow


~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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U_Gene~

Thank you ... you sneaked in there while I was posting before.
Thanks for your comments.
I have enjoyed sharing these Haiku pieces with this forum.
I'll be back ...  

For you -

The essence of Spring
Heard in the twitter of song
Sparrows on the lawn


~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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These are delightfully wonderful, Marge!! I love them!!

Denise
JOY 14
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I agree with everyone else when I say, Excellet job with these haikus.  I have recently tried some, but they don't come close to yours.  I've just got some things to learn, that's all.  Please come back soon, huh?  

Joy
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Denise~
Thank you, dear.  
For you -

Hearts a'fluttering
Heard around the world as song
Must be Spring singing


Joy~
Thank you and I will be back.

For you -

See out on the lawn
Springing forth purple beauty
Flocks and flocks of Phlox

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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lovely work from you...enjoyed them immensely
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I found you! wonderful you!
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