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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-03-12 06:05 PM


I never knew I could miss someone so much in such a short time
Wishing I was beside you, best friend of mine
Part of me is happy, knowing this is where I belong
But another part of my heart is breaking, knowing this is wrong
I should be there, not here
As I feel it drop, another lonely tear
But through the tears I smile thinking of the time we just had
And I am able to laugh for a bit and not feel so sad
Packed up with my clothes I took along the memories of you and I
But don't worry they rest in your heart too, so please dont cry
I am blessed I have you as my best friend, now I know this to be true
Forever and always I want to spend my days with you
This feeling is a bit strange for me I hope you understand
It isnt like me to feel this way, my feelings always at my command
But tonight here I sit thoughts of you going through my brain
And now that we've met, I will never be the same
I walk outside and I look up at the sky and see a shooting star
And make a wish that you didn't live so far
If you begin to miss me, like I have been missing you
Do this one thing for me, this is what I want you to do
Close your eyes and think of me, and in your heart I will be
And that will get us through the days to come, till you can again be with me.




 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 06:09 PM


*sigh* amy-girl this is SO sweet and love filled...perfect!!!!!!
and YEA!!!! AIMSTERS posting again!!!!
take care, jm


This feeling is a bit strange for me I hope you understand
It isnt like me to feel this way, my feelings always at my command
But tonight here I sit thoughts of you going through my brain
And now that we've met, I will never be the same
I walk outside and I look up at the sky and see a shooting star
And make a wish that you didn't live so far
If you begin to miss me, like I have been missing you
Do this one thing for me, this is what I want you to do
Close your eyes and think of me, and in your heart I will be
And that will get us through the days to come, till you can again be with me.
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*SIGH*  

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-03-12 06:14 PM


~Jan

Thanks for your kind words. As always you make me laugh and smile! Thank you!! I haven't been posting last few days. I apologize..I have been kinda sad and not myself as of late. As you can tell in this poem, I am missing my best friend A LOT! Wish she wasn't a thousand miles away, but 'tis life. So for at least a little while I won't be posting a whole lot of my "sunshine" poetry. But don't worry in time..I'll be okay.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-03-12 07:41 PM


Amy this is beautiful.  There's a chance my best friend may move away and I know I will feel nothing less than what you have described here.

Sheila

freckles
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
4 posted 2000-03-12 08:16 PM


Amy---I can certainly understand the feelings of which you speak.  Just recently my best friend and I had to endure a few day break from each other; the pain was unbearable.  My heart goes out to you.  Take care of yourself, and keep those wonderful memories in mind.

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 2000-03-12 09:32 PM


Lovely poem, Amy!

Denise

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2000-03-12 09:54 PM


Whew! This is really quite an emotional poem. Very nicely done.

~Gene

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2000-04-16 11:22 AM


Nice poem!!!!!!
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
8 posted 2000-04-16 11:37 AM


This is beautiful...I haven't seen my best friend in months cos she lives way away...we met at boarding school. I miss her the way you describe here. I know you posted this poem quite a while back but I wanted to reply anyway, late though I am! Lovely lovely poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Chico
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 67

9 posted 2000-04-16 03:10 PM


Hey Aimster, I know it is hard to want somone to be there with you, but they can't. But just think, that will make the time you do get to spend with them all the more precious. cause So many times we have our best friend right there with us, and we take advantage of them, or just don't notice them as much. So there is a good side to it, Although it mught not be to bright to look at, and besides all that, you have us as friends here at passions. Take care now, and If you havent smiled yet today, smile now, knowing that someone cares for you !!!

                       -Chico

[This message has been edited by Chico (edited 04-16-2000).]

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
10 posted 2000-04-17 07:08 AM


I can also relate, I have a friend I moved away from and miss very much, but I've been blest with a friend here at passions that reminds me so much of her that it mends the stitching for now.  Loved your poem beautiful job.  
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