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Jenni6478 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 11 |
Hello everyone..My name is Jennifer and I'm new to this site...this is a poem I wrote in a few minutes to the man I met online, fell in love with, and am going to meet in less than 3 weeks.(his name is Christian).. Sweet Christian Stars above, twinkle down upon me You love me, you love me Every word you speak shines from within Whispers into my soul and hugs my heart Caress the peace that dwells inside You love me, you love me Smile for me, Sweet Christian Never stop Be mine forever Kiss me until we can kiss no more Until our lips are raw and red from loving each other You love me, you love me Cry and let me kiss your tears away Hide them forever and smile for me, Sweet Christian Glow the heat and warmth you bring Feel my love, Sweet Christian Touch me forever, body and soul Laugh with me, feel my heart Soft like yours Let them intertwine and be as one Beating Always, swelling and bumping Red as our lips Soft as our skin Bright as our eyes True as our love You love me, you love me Hold my hand inside of yours Protect me, Sweet Christian Be mine forever Create our world, new and bright colors so vivid, as vivid as light Shine into me, rest your body into mine Feel our hearts beat, Feel them intertwine Let me be your shelter, Sweet Christian You love me, you love me Smile for me, Sweet Christian So honest and true I have been searching for someone That someone is you Breathe into me, our words are one Always together, as bright as the sun Shining and bright, so alive Spinning and twirling higher into the sky Connecting our hearts, beating as one Always together, always as one You love me, you love me Don't cry, Sweet Christian Our love is true You and I know it, Soon the world will too You love me, you love me My Sweet Christian, I love you too |
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why not Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 10 |
Hi Jenni6478! I especially liked these lines Every word you speak shines from within Whispers into my soul and hugs my heart Caress the peace that dwells inside Let them intertwine and be as one Beating Always, swelling and bumping Red as our lips Soft as our skin Bright as our eyes True as our love It is the most fulfilling thing to be inspired by someone I think. take care why not |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a beautiful free verse of love. Well done and welcome to the Pub. : ) |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Jenni. Lovely poem. Chrstian's a lucky guy. ~Gene |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Check your email for a message!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Jenni! Sounds like you are in love! Denise |
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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
Jenn, I hope that my words to those I love "shine from within"...I wish all my words to be that meaningful... I love your poem...and Christian is lucky to have your love... Mike |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Jenni, Welcome to The Pub. This is a wonderful expression of love to Christian. I wish you both much love and happiness together. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
the words are so clear the love so tangible the thoughts so pure i wish i could write like you luck lucky christian |
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Jenni6478 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 11 |
thank you to everyone who responded to my poem...all your kind words are much appreciated  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautiful free verse Jenni. You express your emotion well - in a way that makes it felt by the reader. As the others said - luck, lucky Christian. [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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