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Astraea
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0 posted 2000-03-11 04:44 PM



The Deaths of Knights and Dragons

Battles commensing on fields and skies far and close to home
Raging, suffocating, completely enthralling the needed evil
We call Death as he drifts through
The wash of bloodied scales and singed metal
Making sprites shiver, elves dash away, and glaring coldly
At the unicorn's last breath
As it shudders -once-
And fades away

Amidst the flurry of the war forever resurrecting
Bodies cried out in pain, alike,
As serpentine dragons writhed like ribbons dancing
As knights stopped their last struggles
And Pegasus fell from the sky
Driving himself into the mud and toil
The herald of inspiriration's fallen grace not noticed
Save by the tears of the Muses

"Stop this madness!" the peaceful folk cried at last
Gathering with the unicorns smashing into armor
Breaking their horns pure and changing them forever
From images of innocence and grace
To the war horses swift of foot and healing
Even as their coats of starry white
Turned red
Colts shaken to see their parents die

"What of their pain, too?" a griffen spoke
Corning the leaders of the war with no sides
Just fighting for its sake, listening to their heart's rage
Watching a companion fall
And telling themselves that they would revenge themselves
By sending another spirit to the sky
And letting another tear fall

"Let them die," they replied, eyeing each other with menace
Only stopped by the large beast's beauty
As she stepped between them, proud and sad
Turning away from the battle to lower her ears and sigh
The sigh of accepting and knowing the end would be soon for them
Later they would find her speared through the heart, wings torn
And soldiers and beasts said alike: "She took that spear for us."
Never agreeing that she had died for each other and only themselves

Finally all that was left were one from each side
Battled to their spirit's limit, hungry to settle their mourning cry
Killing each other in a final leap of hatred and loss
A dragon and knight dying beside each other in a pool of liquid ruby
Suddenly wondering what had driven them so
Seeing all the losses cause by a battle they hated so much
That all the people built from magic had to suffer
Until none was left to live on

A child ran up to them, seeing their breathing slow
She was of mundane race: normal for the new dawning day
She was crying bitterly, throwing herself to be comforted between them
Asking what had been wrong
Then staring at each other in surprise at this sign of similarity
Before Death's hand struck
Pulling them away to bathe in the pools
But they could hear her words

"Don't leave, don't go!" she cried.
"What shall I ever do without you all
To keep me safe from nightmares?
How could you do this?
How could you kill all the fairy tales?"
Then her mother called her from the city as she raced home, crying
Opening her fairy tale book only to burst out sobbing
And it echoed across the world

The pages, pictures and words of the tales
Were empty


Okay, so it was pointless.     Sorry everyone.  I'll do better next time.

~Astraea


 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-11 05:05 PM


Astraea, this is a magnificent piece of writing! Captivating tale! Well done!

Denise

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