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just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-09 05:46 PM


It's beautiful out here
as I lay on the beach.
I lay not on the sand
but on a red satin sheet.
The sound of the waves
crashing on the shore.
As I look to the stars thinking
could I ask for more?
You wrap your right arm
around my waist.
As I take in the warmth
of your loving embrace.
You pull me close
and i lightly kiss your chest.
Out of all the nights i've lived
tonight's the best.
The stars are bright.
The sky is blue.
Slowly I begin
making love to you.
After we're done
and the love making is through.
I lay there cuddled
close to you.

(long pause)

As I hold my pillow tight
the alarm clock rings
and i have to open my eyes
knowing all the pain it brings.
It was only a dream.
The beach, we were never there.
That perfect night together
was a night never shared.


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-03-10 12:58 PM


Oh, but I'm sure you'll embrace that night--
Getting there may be a fight,
But if you try, I'm pretty sure
You'll get that love, and night so pure.  

Beautiful poem, fe! Kinda sad that it was just a dream...but hey, reach for the stars!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
2 posted 2000-03-10 07:26 PM


Angie,

This is beautiful. A little sad, kinda like my dreams. Very nicely done.  

~Gene

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
3 posted 2000-03-10 08:22 PM


Wonderful words fe......lose that alarm ok.
Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-03-11 03:40 PM


Ahhhh Dreams ! Sigh.....great poem just_another_fe !  


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