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StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-09 01:43 AM

Night Magic

Your love is a comet
Once in a lifetime feeling
That leaves me walking
Down a shimmering path
OF moonbeams and stardust
Traveling at the speed of light
Twinkling through the milky way
Zooming past asteroids and planets
Creating a new galaxy
Where only we exist
Laying there on our blanket of stars
Our love burning hotter and brighter than the sun

~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-03-09 07:12 AM

So beautiful and passionate Starr! Love, the most wonderful feeling in the world!!!

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

2 posted 2000-03-09 10:27 AM

This is very appropriate for the place you put it--Passions!

Incredible imagery, great poem...I'm glad you're posting at the Pub, Starr!

Hope you post some more!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-10 11:43 AM

Very beautiful!

Denise

Kitty_Fett
Junior Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 35

4 posted 2000-03-10 02:51 PM

I really like the way that you use words to attempt to discribe a feeling that is well beyond words. Nice Work!!

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

5 posted 2000-03-10 06:19 PM

There goes the Universe,,,,nicely used Starr

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2000-03-11 04:14 PM

I love the universe imagery you used here.

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

7 posted 2000-03-11 05:17 PM

I love stars. I love passion. I love Passions too.

I also love love. Wonderful poem.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

8 posted 2000-03-11 06:04 PM

Thank all of you for the comments ...

I have thislove affair withthe stars lol as time permits perhaps I'll post some more of my star themed poems

~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~

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