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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-09 01:42 AM


My Secret

Crying inside
But you will never know
So easy to fall
So damn hard to let go

You say you don't want to hurt me
Can't we just be friends?
Sure, okay give me some time -
And when my heart mends...

Until then I'll just pretend
That everythings okay
But excuse me if I am at a loss for words
Or don't know what to say

I do care about you
And want you to be happy
So I guess this is the way
Things will have to be

I'll hold you in my heart
And never will let go
But that's okay, it's my secret
You will never know!



 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-03-09 07:14 AM


I don't think there's many things harder than pretending only friendship which one whom you love.  You have written well of that dilema.
Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-03-09 10:26 AM


I agree with child, you addressed this problem very well, and put it into a beautiful poem!   Great job, StarrGazer!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Poet deVine
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Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-03-09 02:02 PM


I like this a lot...as I've done this very thing. Thank you for putting it into words.
Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
4 posted 2000-03-09 02:37 PM


Wonderful poem.  Yep, I've also been in the same place for quite a number of years. She was my first real love, so I can never completely let go.

~Gene

jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
5 posted 2000-03-09 02:50 PM


Oh yes, I know exactly how this one feels at this time in my life. It's nice to know I'm not alone *sigh* Thankfully we are still friends but every day I look at him and wonder why he can't love me......

 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.

Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-10 11:53 AM


Wonderful poem! I'm sure we can all relate to this pain.

Denise

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
7 posted 2000-03-11 06:09 PM


Thanks for all of your kind replys ....  
guess everything has a reason and friends are better than nothing huh?

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-12-25 09:41 AM


how beautiful...sad but beautiful
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