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Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

0 posted 2000-03-07 01:39 PM

There is a stone wall
somewhere between love and hate;
jump it once or twice.

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Depending what side you start out on,
"jump it once or twice." Get it?

~Gene

freckles
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 160
Virginia USA

1 posted 2000-03-07 06:12 PM

Gene---thanks.........my problem seems to be that I jump too fast (always with the best of intentions and hopes, mind you). For now, I'll stay hidden behind the wall (I am, however, on the love side--that's why I'm hurting so much). I will keep your advice in mind for when I decide to jump again.

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-03-07 07:22 PM

It wasn't meant for me but - I got it Gene!

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

3 posted 2000-03-07 07:43 PM

freckles,
yep, I know how you feel. But if you jump real quick to the hate side (just for a second), you'll kill that demon that's holding you back. Just be sure to jump back to the love side.

Child,
Sure it is...it's meant for everyone.

~Gene

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-07 08:12 PM

Gene,
I really liked this one. I get screwed up with my jumping. Seems I jump too fast when it should have been slow or jump too slow when it should have been faster. Maybe one day I'll get the pattern right.

Sheila

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-03-08 10:15 AM

This is great and very well written!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

6 posted 2000-03-08 07:05 PM

Wow, talk about a few words packed with meaning...I'm not so sure it's for me either, but it sure is great! Good work, Gene!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-03-08 09:51 PM

Gene this is great! So clever!

Denise

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2000-05-29 01:58 AM

i certainly didn't expect this...very refreshingly different and original

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

9 posted 2000-05-30 01:29 PM

Gene,
Yeah, I like this, LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAP!
Another thoughtful work! Dennis :^)

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