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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Vortex Below the ancient cliffs which rise above the coarse gray sand Beyond the black rocks worn by unknown millennia of cold, crashing waves The spinning vortex screams as it swallows the ocean that gives it life © 3/3/00 Gary Pence Simple words from a simple guy |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent poem with awesome visualization!! Enjoyed this immensely! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is wonderful! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Your writing is amazing, I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow, you've packed so much imagery into only nine lines! I only wish I could do something like that...this is a great piece of work, Gary! Hope to see more!  And welcome to the Pub!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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