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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
Okay guys I haven`t written anything new in a while but here`s an old one. I also didn`t have time to reply to all the poems I read but They were all great so keep 'em coming! Your Creation Moods shift Ever so quickly, Like the change of season I love so much. Extreme joys and sorrows Were once mutually exclusive But have now evolved into 1, And you are at fault. All the contradictions, All the indifference, Look what you`ve made me become. My mind is overcome with confusion. A new state of being, A new frame of mind. My old world no longer exists, Only this endless oblivion And you are The Creator. Look at this world... Look at my world now. "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Whew! Boy can I relate to this Heather! For me this is a very powerful poem! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~heather wow! i'm impressed...this was simply beautiful! i am fairly new to passions, so this is the first poem of yours i read. i look foward to seeing more from you. thanks so much for posting this, i could relate to it so well. take care amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
A destructive creator...a contradiction like so many in the world today, a concept put into perfect poetry by you, Heather! Great job!  Amy - You may be new to the Pub, but I think it's the general opinion that your work is very, very good! Keep it up, we'd like to see more!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Heather! Denise |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
Heather - What a powerful statement you make with this piece...I still have chills. Incredible. I hope you write & post more soon. Sheilan |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Heather, Such pure emotion in this poem, I LOVE IT! I have a feeling all of us poets are blessed with the extra emotion we feel so that we can share it with others who do not understand. It is up to all of us to teach those about the beauty, sadness, and sometimes the hoplessness this world brings on. Wonderfully Descriptive Poem! Keep them coming!  --Jamie |
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