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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
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San Diego, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-02-29 07:42 PM



Flying...
Doesn't it feel so good
Just to do it once in a while?
All the time, I wish I could...
'cause it always brings a smile!  

Well, this particular day
I flew pretty close to the coast,
Set down on the beach, then walked away
To a place not spotted by most.

Stretches of sand, secluded and calm,
Shells from the sea and swaying palms,
This is the place where I stopped to rest.
Out of all that I'd been, this was one of the best!

The water's warm, pristine and blue,
The sky a brilliant cerulean hue,
Gently waves slowly lap at your feet
As you stretch out on sand in the soothing heat.

Well, after that, I went for a walk
Along the beach, beside the rock.
Before too long, I stopped and found
An old wooden box shoved into the ground.

It wasn't too much of a sight to see,
Rotted and aging, looked beat-up to me!
It was easy to open the box with my claws--
They come in more handy than most humans' saws!

Inside I found a big surprise--
Something so priceless, it opened my eyes--
A treasure so large, but not of gold,
And it was too heavy for me to hold!

Shocked and amazed, I walked away,
Decided to come back another day
When I was ready for the gift I had seen.
So I left the place, still and serene.


If you're curious as to what the gift was,
I can't really tell you--that's because
The gift is a person (and her replies).
That's what was the big surprise!  


Thank you Janet Marie for giving me more credit than I deserve, I really really appreciate it!!!   You're a great poet too!

Little Spyro T. Dragon


© Copyright 2000 Sam Reinsford (Little_Spyro) - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-02-29 07:56 PM


~here i go crying again...! spyro you are such a little sweetie...janet was right   this was so touching and so true..janets responses are like little treasures each of us gets to open each day. i thank you both for welcoming into your special world

amy  
p.s. spyro did i mention...great poem!

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!
2 posted 2000-02-29 08:42 PM


What splendid writing you have here, and what an honor you bestow to Janet Marie, I have also noticed her kindness and you have captured it beautifully in your poem.
Denise
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Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-29 10:33 PM


This is a beautiful tribute to a beautiful person! Excellent, as usual, Sam!

Denise

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-03-01 12:00 PM


    

WOW...SAMMY...I am sitting here smiling like the cheshire cat...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL SWEET POEM.!!
This touches me deeply...the poem is equisite..that you wrote it for me...leaves me speechless. thank you to AMY-girl, NC and Denise for the sweet words as well.
I've said it before...I LOVE this place!!

thank you sammy, truly!!and you are an extraordinary poet...dont doubt it...
say hello to "EXILE" for me
janet marie

PS>>>FRAME IT!!!!!!(smile)

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-03-01 06:17 PM


Sam, you're such a sweet soul and always manage to bring a smile on my face.  
A wonderful poem for a wonderful person. You deserve it Janet !  

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
6 posted 2000-03-01 07:14 PM


What a wonderful poem for Janet Marie!!  Spyro you continue to amaze me!!  What do you do, write these things in your sleep???

    

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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7 posted 2004-12-25 09:10 AM


a wonderful gift for a wonderful lady
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