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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
Seeing You Again Once again I see you... so alive with energy - Your spirit shining like diamonds in your eyes, Your hair falling in unruly waves over your ears and shoulders... leaving the face I love so much exposed for all to see and remember... and, that I do. Seeing you again... brings back warm memories; The day we met, your laugh- your voice, your touch- so warm, reassuring and safe. God, how I missed that. Seeing you again... I can remember all the times we laughed. I can taste again the tears of our bittersweet love....you know it could've last forever. I used to wonder... if you knew what I was doing- and if you saw my pain when you so abruptly left. I was angry - I've forgiven you now... I never could stay mad at you. For so long I have been trying to wish you back to life... and now I have- even if it's just... in a photograph. Sheilan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Sheilan This one moved me to tears. It's hard to let someone go. Trust me, I know all too well. It's even harder to let them go when you know or feel they should still be in your life! I can relate to the feelings and emotions expressed in this poem. Thank you so much for sharing.. amy  < !signature-->~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI and welcome to passions!!! I have just read all 3 of your posts here...they are EXCELLENT. I like your style of expression. I related all to well to these 2 latest posts. Your first post of teenage reflection was excellent, very well written and expressed. its nice to have you here, I too am so glad I found this place. take care, janet marie You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
Thanks all, I appreciate the feedback....it helps let me know I am definately doing the right thing by sharing. Hope I can touch and even comfort many. Sheilan |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
What a beautiful peice of work! I too have red your other posts and do so enjoy your work. You write in a way that seems to touch everyones heart!  [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
W-well--*sniff*, I'd say y-you're off to a gr-r-*sniff*-eat start here at Passions, Sheilan! *blows nose* All of your poems are incredible...*sniff* I'm so glad you started posting here, I really am! Please keep up the...*sniff* good work...  Little Spyro T. Dragon [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully touching, Sheilan! Very well done! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear...  this is touching...very |
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