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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
So much has passed before my weary eyes. So much has come and gone, nothing takes me by surprise. So much pain and sorrow to wake up to and face each day. So much hope and yearning for the dawn of a good day. So much is given, only to be taken away. So much has been lost with a high price to pay. So much can be made of the days that lie ahead. So much can be had if the water can be tread. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Beautiful, Sasikat!  This poem kind of leaves me speechless (sort of), I'm not too sure what to make of it--great display of emotion, or just plain great...well, either way, it's an excellent piece of work! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Life can certainly bring us much loss and pain. You have expressed it well. Great poem! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SAS, this is so well expressed...nice work with this one! my friend use to say..."if there weren't any sadness...how would you know the difference or whether or not you were actually happy"... she use to give me a headache..LOL  but this poem reminded me of her meaning... and this...  She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. Matchbox20 I love you baby... always.* |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Sounds like there's been some suffering in your lifetime Sasi. You express it very well. And yes, the water can be tread, albeit with difficulty.  |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
This is really touching, but life is not hopeless, when a door closes another opens..Bill |
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