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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554


0 posted 2000-02-28 06:36 PM


~All My Wishes Are For You~

If I could of had 3 wishes...
I would have given them all to you.
If I could hold you again, just once more...
for the rest of my time...its all I would ever do.

Love can heal a hearts deepest, darkest, pain,
and then turn around and give it right back again.
But I'll not trade a single tear that my heart has shed...
I'd give my all to have back...what I had with you then.

Love is fragile, like a delicate antique dish,
when not on display, it should be adorned with linens and lace.
Cherish and treasure these precious moments in time...
with in the seconds of one last glance...it can all be taken from our embrace.

They say fate has its reasons...
to everything... a season... a purpose... a plan.
Your love of me...was fate's sweetest gift,
the reasons of why your not still here by my side...I am learning to accept and understand.

Janet Marie  


 She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*



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childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-02-28 06:42 PM


How beautiful Janet Marie.  We don't have much choice but to accept some things but it sure would help if we could understand.  How true that we should treasure love while we have it!
William P Bussey
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

2 posted 2000-02-28 07:12 PM


Janet, The greatest gift we receive is love, the pain will pass and the world will shine on you once more, Love will come again, I promise. You can express you feelings very well. Hang in there....Bill
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-02-28 07:21 PM


Oh Janet Marie, how I can relate to this beautiful piece so well.  The line "love can heal a hearts deepest, darkest pain and then turn around and give it right back again" is so very true.  Wonderfully written.

Sheila

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
4 posted 2000-02-28 09:04 PM


How sad the experience your relate-but a wonderful poem to tell of it!  I'm touched by your plight-I hope that time will make up for and surpass your failed relationships.    Your Friend , David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-02-28 09:32 PM


This is sad yet beautiful and shows great inner strength in suffering. Great poem, Janet Marie!

Denise

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2000-02-28 10:13 PM


~Jan

Okay time for me to come up with some awesome words huh lol...have to say this one was really beautiful. i am not glad that you are having to go through this pain. HOWEVER i am glad that you honor us by sharing your feelings with us in such beautiful pieces of work. every poem i have read of yours thus far shows character of strength, and also wisdom from learning of life's experiences and lessons. I hope love returns to you once more. Until then, try to smile and lift your head. You are a wondeful writer, but more important from what i've seen...wondeful person.

much respect,
amy      

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
Posts 228

7 posted 2005-01-15 09:10 PM


"Love can heal a hearts deepest, darkest, pain, and then turn around and give it right back again."
That is one of the greatest truths...

Excellent write, deeply touching.


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