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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
And each day passes by in a melancholy haze, not knowing where we're going, or even where we've been, searching for a lost Nirvana in the doldroms of our souls and our life. and with each day that passes what can we do but hope, or dream? what is this maya? what is this haze? a motel for our souls before the greater journey ensues --one that has to end with happiness -because-well, what else is left? |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Perfect blessedness. So beautiful. This certainly is an illusory world when you contemplate what is told to be waiting for us afterward. You've written clearly about a controversial subject in just a few words. Beautiful! Truly enjoyed this!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent rich, I love the line... "motel for our souls" ..perfect imagery here in the "haze" very good work. janet marie She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. Matchbox20 I love you baby... always.* |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Rich, This is truly a wonderful expression of our next journey. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Sheila |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Rich, The first part of your verse had me thinking of my teen years, searching for a direction to my life. Very good, and thoughtful.....Bill |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sad yet beautiful, Rich. Well done. I'm sure everyone can relate to this. Denise |
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