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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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imagine, if you will a tiny forest glen quiet and cool in varying shades of green the trees spread their arms to protect Nature's Cathedral encompassing the glen in a leafy embrace vines crawl up the rough bark twining and weaving around and across and through moss carpets the floor and emerging spring wildflowers poke their sleepy heads up from the wakening earth a fallen log is your chair soft moss and ferns your cushion imagine the scents and the faint forest noises as all the tiny creatures watch in wonder the tiny birds that flit the hum of the bees the call of the hawk the rustle in the bushes of a timid little hare imagine then spreading open a book and starting to write poetry of all you see and hear and smell and feel imagine what beautiful words would come to mind in a place such as this [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Simply put, beautiful. Alicat |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I'm with Alicat - beautiful!!!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, it sounds like heaven to me!!! This is soooo beautiful, X Angel!! Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
You know I just realized that I sorta plaguerized my own poem I wrote a long long time ago! (called The Gift) Weird.... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This, my friends, is what XAngel said to me when I asked her how to write free verse... So I guess this is it in a nutshell..  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
X Angel, thank you for this beautiful walk through your forest. It gave me the inner peace I needed so much today. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I could definetely imagine this! So serene, like I stepped out of my house and into that forest! Joy |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
The icon was me before reading this little bit of tranquility....I'm with Munda, thanks XAngel  Sheilan |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A lovely walk through the beautiful canvas you painted for us X Angel .... I love the way you describe the magnificence of nature that alot of your poems reflect .... "the trees spread their arms to protect Nature's Cathedral" The imagery is wonderous in this piece..... Hey, can you tell I really like it ?!!! |
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