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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-23 05:30 PM


My thoughts of you are but a whisper
like a soft and gentle breeze,
lightly caressing my heart and soul
with bitter-sweet memories.

Your walk, your eyes, the way you smile
are all etched within my mind,
a portrait of love and happiness
to carry with me through time.

When I feel the sand beneath my feet,
the wind whispering in my ear,
I often think of how it was
and wish that you were here.

I'll always feel a sadness
because we had to part,
but because of having known you
sweet memories fill my heart.

I love you dear brother!

© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-23 06:15 PM


Wow...!
I don't even know him, but your poem made me miss him--not many things can do that. You did an excellent job with this! Keep 'em coming!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-24 12:25 PM


childomine...how did I miss this one earlier, its a sweet and love filled dedication to your brother. very nice
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-24 10:23 AM


This is such a beautiful, loving tribute to Jeff!  

Denise

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-02-26 06:14 PM


Love this one childomine !  
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
5 posted 2000-02-27 07:58 PM


This is in very simple terms BEAUTIFUL!
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