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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-23 05:04 PM


I do not want to hurt any more
I just want to experience some peace.
I do not want to cry any more
I just want to feel a little joy.
I do not want to be lonely any more
I just want to feel part of the crowd.
I do not want to be turned away any more,
pushed away with an emotional shove.
I just want to experience it all -
the joys that come from love.

© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-23 06:12 PM


Yeah...I feel the same way! It'd be really nice of all the negatives could be cleared away...maybe someday!  

Beautiful poem, childomine!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-02-23 07:44 PM


Nice poem..I can relate to what you're saying as I think we all can.....
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-23 10:03 PM


sweet expression of a simple wish...we all long for this..nice job...
take care,janet marie

Another Heather
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 93
Canada
4 posted 2000-02-24 03:00 AM


Nicely expressed. I do hope we all get to feel those joys at some point in our lives.

Denise
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Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-02-24 10:34 AM


Yep, we can all realate to this, I'm sure!
Very nice writing!

Denise

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